Thursday 7 July 2016

Austen's Hidden meaning poem

For literacy we had to make a poem with a hidden meaning, can you work out mine?

No.1 My books

No.2 Balls, balls, balls.

4 comments:

  1. Hi how are you? Cool poem I like it how you put good detail on it. I made a poem before but I think your one is better. How did you make that poem. I really like the poem you should make more. How did you think of that poem?

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  2. Sup Austin You're poem was great! Lots of good little hints in there that don’t give too much away. I think I was able to guess it pretty easily because that I read a lot. One other thing you might wanna change your background because it was a big give away too what your mystery thing was. Are you proud of your work?

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  3. Hello No.2 balls,balls and balls Your poem was really good I enjoyed it a lot. I like too play a lot of sports so it was easy too make a connection in your poem about a sports ball. And it’s pretty easy too see what your mystery thing is when it’s your background. Do you play sports yourself?

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  4. This is nice post nice to read The Learning Hub

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