Thursday, 7 July 2016

Christian's "Out the Window" Poem

We read a poem called Journey through the stars, it used language features that showed us creative ways to describe something without saying what it is. 
Here is my poem called "Out the window" 

By Christian 


  1. Hi how are you? Really good poem about the weather and the sun.I made a poem before but If ithink about it, it was really bad and yours is really good better then mine.How did you think of making such a detailed poem? Nice poem. can you teach me how to do a poem like yours?

  2. Sup Christian, Great story very emotional and deep it looks like you have put a lot of thought into it. I have seen lots of wet muddy grounds like the ones in your poem.On slide 5 the words were pretty hard too see so maybe you should change the font colour. How long did it take you to write the poem?