Monday, 4 July 2016

Looking out the Window - Aashna

In Mrs Parker's literacy group we had to write a poem about looking out the window. I hope you enjoy my poem!


  1. Hi Aashna
    Your poem is amazing, I wish I had skills like yours. Next time you could have animation on the last slide with the rainbow and you need to have some more punctuation. I have written poems before. How did you do the animation? What kind of poem did you write?


  2. Hi Aashna
    I like your poem it was cool and fun. I liked how you added cool animation. Good Job. I wrote poems before. Next time I think you should add some punctuation. How did you add the animation?