Some of the learners from Hub 8 wrote this wonderful letter to ask for permission for a field trip we are planning for our concept learning. It's an awesome sample of collaborative persuasive letter writing.
23 May 2016
Dear Miss Martin,
We are writing to you because we need permission to go to Mission Bay on the 9th of June 2016.
We chose as a hub that collaboration is the learner quality that we need to work on the most. Then we looked at a range of places and Mission Bay had most the votes, so we decided that we would go to Mission Bay.
The trip is for our concept learning and we believe this trip will strengthen our ability to work collaboratively within a group of people who we usually don't work with. It will also construct new relationships with our fellow classmates.
We are currently collaboratively working on the E.O.T.C, R.A.M’s and the organisation of the transport to Mission Bay, including plan and lastly, a race in the fountain with our mini wakas. We had built these mini-wakas for this specific reason for our concept learning as well.
The things we did to plan to go to Mission Bay were that we had to make a healthy lunch and decided on what collaborative games we were going to play. Also we went on a preparational trip to the Wetlands so we know what to expect, here we had practiced playing our own collaborative games.
Once we have your approval we will write and send letters to the parents to inform them of the coming trip. We are really looking forward to getting permission to go to Mission Bay. This will be such a great learning opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Learning Hub 8.
(Written by Shanya, Austen, Carmen, Brittany and Isaac)
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