Monday 27 June 2016

Izzy's DDP writing

He tried not to look down but he couldn't help it he stared at the dark navy ocean he could feel his hands slowly sliding down the thick rope the water was just below his waist. Then Jimmy grim hold could feel something holding a mighty grip on his legs, He could feel eight slimy tentacles trying to drag him down the deep .Yep you guessed it the octopus.The octopus swung higher on the rope could it be was the big slimey creature pulling him aboard would he make it alive as the octopus pulled him just above half way the slimy creature jumped in the ocean  and dived in the deep Jimmy could at last pull himself aboard Alas he was safe.

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