Thursday, 23 June 2016

My Paragraph

Quinn felt a sneeze coming up "ahh AHHH CHOOOOOOO" it then made a monster appear But then Mistress pippin heard the sound and she came running trying to look for Quinn but Quinn wasn't anywhere to be seen but from around the corner Mistress pippin saw was…

Quinn but she looked pale and then she said to mistress pippin with an old quiet voice "Run! he's coming!!!"

"Who,Who's coming?" Mrs pippin said

Tuesday, 21 June 2016

What Is the different between a Narrative and a Recount by Leila , Isabella , Mugdha , Izzy , Rachel.

WALHT: review the narrative structure

Talk to a learner beside you.

MM: Compare what is the difference between a Narrative and a recount.

BK: BWIK Record here

Read the following posters

Narrative poster and Recount poster

Let's discuss the differences you have seen.



Narrative

Recount

Difference 1

Well  defined characters

Includes the people  involved

Difference 2

Fiction

Non   Fiction

Difference 3

Written in first person or third person

Writing  Past tense

Difference 4

No conclusion

Has conclusion

No Hunting


​This is my poster about deer. In my perspective I think that hunting should be banned in NZ. We read a story inside our jouranal named Deer Oh Deer by Mary Campbell. This story was published in 2010. We also had to write a persuasasive story on the story that we read.

Amy's google profile

Narrative refresh from Riley

Group:
Amy
Isabelle
Riley
Jade
Maddy



sebs writing



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